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Monday, September 14, 2020
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TJ the cute dog#my story#dog for life
hi guys and gals
today i did a narrative and i like it i hope you like it to
take a look
🐶🐶TJ the cute dog 🐶🐶
By tayla.
Aah! the radio is too loud thought the little dog named TJ.TJ is brown,white and very cute and she loves her owner .The man in the car with little,TJ is really nice.TJ could feel the seat and she can see the seat that she was,sitting on just by looking down and the man that she was with can only hear the radio like her and when she looks up she can’t really see so she has to jump to see more dog’s like her and TJ can see the shop’s,cafe’s and cars that are blue and black and red. She can see the grass and a dog park.
The man went too fast for her so she got stuck in the seat the man didn’t know,that she was stuck she tried to bark but she can’t because the radio was TOO LOUD,she was really,sad but mad and the owner had no clue that she was stuck She could feel pain in her back legs and in her front legs too she yelped but the man could not hear her what will she do now the man could not hear her she can’t crawl out.
Then the man got onto a Highway and went even faster TJ gets more stuck in the seat but he got to his mom's house and he thought TJ got out but she didn’t she was still in the car stuck in the seat it was a hot day as well she was panting.
When the man got back he saw TJ and got her out and drove to the vet when he got to the vet and she had a broken leg the man was relieved that she was not dead when they got home TJ went to bed same with the man the journey was over.
The end.
I am a purple level writer because my narrative has an introduction,problem and solution in paragraphs,fully edited.that takes the reader on a journey.
today i did a narrative and i like it i hope you like it to
take a look
🐶🐶TJ the cute dog 🐶🐶
By tayla.
Aah! the radio is too loud thought the little dog named TJ.TJ is brown,white and very cute and she loves her owner .The man in the car with little,TJ is really nice.TJ could feel the seat and she can see the seat that she was,sitting on just by looking down and the man that she was with can only hear the radio like her and when she looks up she can’t really see so she has to jump to see more dog’s like her and TJ can see the shop’s,cafe’s and cars that are blue and black and red. She can see the grass and a dog park.
The man went too fast for her so she got stuck in the seat the man didn’t know,that she was stuck she tried to bark but she can’t because the radio was TOO LOUD,she was really,sad but mad and the owner had no clue that she was stuck She could feel pain in her back legs and in her front legs too she yelped but the man could not hear her what will she do now the man could not hear her she can’t crawl out.
Then the man got onto a Highway and went even faster TJ gets more stuck in the seat but he got to his mom's house and he thought TJ got out but she didn’t she was still in the car stuck in the seat it was a hot day as well she was panting.
When the man got back he saw TJ and got her out and drove to the vet when he got to the vet and she had a broken leg the man was relieved that she was not dead when they got home TJ went to bed same with the man the journey was over.
The end.
I am a purple level writer because my narrative has an introduction,problem and solution in paragraphs,fully edited.that takes the reader on a journey.
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