the 2 dogs by Tayla h

hi
this week i have been writing about 2 dogs at the beach
tell me what you want me to improve my writing
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my six sentence story

   hi readers 
   this week  we learnt how to write a six sentence story 
   a six sentence story is a narrative and six parts 

1.  has Once Upon a Time and introduces the main character  
2. says where they live
3. says there talent
4. tells the problem 
5. tells how they felt  
6. tells how they got over the problem 

   this is my six sentence story 

Climbing by tayla

hello reader's i'm Tayla. this week for
writing read it.

Climbing   

One day there was a girl called sue.
Sue is 9 years old. 

Sue has hair. Sue has hazel eye.
Sue is sweating and shredded 

Her arms and legs. Sue fleet joyful and
shocked.    by Tayla :)