my pancake

hi this is my  pancake  story 
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Pancake by Tayla h 

I was in the kitchen  and I made a gold fluffy
pancake 

and I flipped it, and flew out  the window rolled
into the 
classroom  slipped on to the dirt hill,and it slid on to the veg garden and slapped on to  the hills and fell into the gutter and landed in water.I was sad because I did not get to eat the pancake.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭     

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