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Thursday, November 28, 2019

my pancake

hi this is my  pancake  story 
take a look 

Pancake by Tayla h 

I was in the kitchen  and I made a gold fluffy
pancake 
and I flipped it, and flew out  the window rolled
into the 
classroom  slipped on to the dirt hill,and it slid on to the veg garden and slapped on to  the hills and fell into the gutter and landed in water.I was sad because I did not get to eat the pancake.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭     

4 comments:

  1. hi tayla i love your thing about your pancake and how it got wet.and i have no feed back just it cool!.
    from ollie

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  2. hi tayla its me ruben i really like the way u used emojis next time put some more detales so we know why u did it. how long did this take?😉

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