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Thursday, August 13, 2020

my setting

hi guys and gals
today i did a setting like describe it so fist i rotated and my book then on my chrome book so this is mine please like and enjoy

I got a book off the shelf and put it on the table made out of wood.I saw an island with the oldest trees in life.I can hear the wind in my hair. I can smell the cinnamon trees in the air.I can touch the greenest grass and rocks that make you strong as the hulk and i feel happy like a little dog.THE END
          

i hope you like it thank you bye
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 13, 2020 at 1:59 PM

    I liked that you said hi guys and gals today and the other stuff
    but you should say ladies and gent man this time good work 👍👍

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    1. TaylaAugust 13, 2020 at 2:07 PM

      hi alister thank you for the feback i will try thank you tayla

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  2. ruben chimbaAugust 17, 2020 at 2:26 PM

    hi tayla,
    i like the way you used very descriptive words.it remind's me of when i did my story of the cave.next time make sure your description makes sense.how long did this take?

    kind regards,
    Ruben
    click here to see my blog

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    1. TaylaAugust 25, 2020 at 12:23 PM

      hi ruben rhank you for the feedback
      what is your fav bit?
      tayla

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