Hi Tayla think you have written some very good poems. The countdown one was good as it keeps going with the story even with the number of words going down each line. Was your sound poem from real sounds you heard outside, or did you just make it up?
Hi Tayla, Your blog posts are making me hungry..first, some fantastic looking cupcakes you baked with your Mum, then in your lockdown poetry a haiku with ice cream in it, a tongue twister with an Angel cake & in your countdown poem chicken for dinner, then breakfast.. You've stirred up my taste buds! Great work! I hope you have enjoyed your time in lockdown, it looks like you have. I'm looking forward to your next post.
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Hi Tayla
ReplyDeletethink you have written some very good poems. The countdown one was good as it keeps going with the story even with the number of words going down each line. Was your sound poem from real sounds you heard outside, or did you just make it up?
Hi Tayla,
ReplyDeleteYour blog posts are making me hungry..first, some fantastic looking cupcakes you baked with your Mum, then in your lockdown poetry a haiku with ice cream in it, a tongue twister with an Angel cake & in your countdown poem chicken for dinner, then breakfast.. You've stirred up my taste buds! Great work!
I hope you have enjoyed your time in lockdown, it looks like you have. I'm looking forward to your next post.